The English call William Wallace, a Scottish hero, "an outcast from pity, a robber, a sacrilegious man, an incendiary and a homicide, a man more cruel than the cruelty of Herod, and more insane than the fury of Nero." They not only dislike Wallace, but don't respect him. They consider Wallace below them, and make him sound more animal than human.
The English also insult Robert the Bruce, a man seen as a great king by the Scottish. They make him seem dishonorable by writing, "...Bruce, drawing his sword, strikes the unarmed Comyn on the head." By taking away his honor, they are proving themselves superior to the Scots.
The Scots, while they do not mention William Wallace or Robert the Bruce directly, see their people as enduring and strong leaders. They say that their people "...dwelt for a long course of time in Spain among the most savage tribes, but nowhere could they be subdued by any race, however barbarous." The Scots consider themselves brave and able to protect their people.
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1st Paragraph: Used "barbaric" in two sentences in a row, try to find a synonym.
ReplyDelete2nd Paragraph: Maybe say "a hero for the Scottish," since everyone didn't think of him as a hero. Good last sentence, though, it really sums it up well.
3rd Paragraph: Maybe explain a little bit behind the quote. For all the readers know, Comyn could have been a man who was just about to kill Robert and he was only defending himself. State the circumstances.
4th Paragraph: Maybe just enhance it a bit, by adding something like "from any threats or dangers," or something, just to make it sound a little better/more clear.
I do not follow the point you are making about the English view of the Bruce. Elaborate.
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